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To Be a Better Stallion Epilogue by Autumn-Wind-MLP To Be a Better Stallion Epilogue by Autumn-Wind-MLP

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After a crushing second rejection from Rarity, Blueblood finds himself rather emotionally shaken. However, when he finds himself under the guidance of an unassuming farmer, the noblecolt's life will take a turn the likes of which he would never have expected.

Epilogue: Happily Ever After

Eleven months have passed, and the gala comes around. What has become of our leading couple through the passing months, and what awaits their future?
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knucklesxjulie4ever Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wonderful story write from the beginning, shame that this couple isn't that muched liked, but still a great story.
Sencilia-Harp Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012
a wonderful end to a wonderful fic ^^
NE1there Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012
Actually, reading through this again, Apricot seems okay. I'd like to see more introspection and pacing still, but that's okay.
NE1there Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012
This is one of the shipping fics that feels fuzzy, warm, and maybe, in an alt. universe, even possible. Gave it 5-stars.

The plot (of the fic) was well-written, and I liked many of the details, like Big Mac's tasks, the nearby inn and the pony there, etc. That said, parts could use work, mostly character-building:
-Mainly that Apricot didn't ever get much depth of personality. Motivations and reactions with him and Blueblood were predictable.
-Blueblood changes without enough pivotal "Aha!" moments to be realistic. It's okay for fanfic, but def. could be better.
-Not much introspection. People tend to think that action is always best. Sometimes dialoguing thoughts can make them sound a bit too contrived.
-And a minor point: Rarity's also a little shallow. Wouldn't be an issue in a Blueblood-centered fic, but she has enough written about her that we start to expect a bit more.

Hope that helps, and hope to see more of your writing in the future.
TGWolven5 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
sighs... What a romantic story!

I read another Prince Blueblood fanfic a while back and frankly, it doesn't compare to yours in any way!

The character development throughout this whole story was so endearing and just drew me in the more I read.

I'm starting my own MLP FIM fanfic, which is likely to turn into a romance story as well, but no matter how hard I try, it will never be anywhere as good as what you have graced us all in this tender, heart-warming miracle of literature.

Bless you for your creativity and insight!
iamthejam Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012
Excellent story. Considering all the surprises and plot twists that the series have given us this season, your story is very impressive.
Radoxeald Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
A Happy Ending! :iconcutenessoverloadplz: :iconsuperw00tplz: :icontwilightclapplz:

I guess I couldn't give any more suitable response than this: [link]

Wonderful, wonderful story. This has settled to be one of my utmost favorite MLP fanfics. Blueblood's characterization worked brilliantly, at first I was skeptical on Blueblood-Rarity ship, but you could say that Bluey really won me over. Not to mention how story rolled smoothly from start to finish and had SO MUCH HEARTWARMING. SweetieSpike was a nice touch, FlutterMac is always generous plus in my eyes and even Diamond Tiara & Silver Spoon are getting their share of character development.

All my salutes, Autumn. All my salutes :iconrainbowdashsaluteplz:
LightningHoofAUS Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
oh damn, this story has been one sweet ride for all of us. I would like to say thank you for a wonderful a series I have love reading, *wipes tears away* this last story to this wonderful series is the best one ever written. You are a wonderful person and a wonderfully gifted writer. My one wish is write write as wonderfully as do you but I do have my own series I am working on which is going to be very long in it self with the CMC, *claps a hand over mouth* opps I can't give away to much info on what I have install for them in my A Falling Out series yet
MoochiinLove Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2012
I can't believe you!! I can't believe you would do that! Just....just leave the ending there!! Making me guess whether she said yes or no! (I know she says yes, but come on!) Still, this was a fantastic story, I always got so excited when a new chapter came out! Will there be a sequel, like Blueblood and Rarity dealing with his mother? Oh I can't wait for more!
Autumn-Wind-MLP Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2012
I don't think dealing with the mother would make for a very interesting fic, considering the mother has been deceased for a while.

I don't have any sequels planned for the moment, mostly because I'm somewhat burned out on this fic for now. Perhaps one day, but I cannot make any promises. I'm glad you enjoyed it, however. It's likely that I'll eventually make other works in a similar mood, however.

Feel free to look up my other writings. Glad you enjoyed this one! ^^
WragnaroqRMageddon Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2012
That is all I have to say.
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