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Epilogue: Happily Ever After
Eleven months have passed, and the gala comes around. What has become of our leading couple through the passing months, and what awaits their future?
The plot (of the fic) was well-written, and I liked many of the details, like Big Mac's tasks, the nearby inn and the pony there, etc. That said, parts could use work, mostly character-building:
-Mainly that Apricot didn't ever get much depth of personality. Motivations and reactions with him and Blueblood were predictable.
-Blueblood changes without enough pivotal "Aha!" moments to be realistic. It's okay for fanfic, but def. could be better.
-Not much introspection. People tend to think that action is always best. Sometimes dialoguing thoughts can make them sound a bit too contrived.
-And a minor point: Rarity's also a little shallow. Wouldn't be an issue in a Blueblood-centered fic, but she has enough written about her that we start to expect a bit more.
Hope that helps, and hope to see more of your writing in the future.
I read another Prince Blueblood fanfic a while back and frankly, it doesn't compare to yours in any way!
The character development throughout this whole story was so endearing and just drew me in the more I read.
I'm starting my own MLP FIM fanfic, which is likely to turn into a romance story as well, but no matter how hard I try, it will never be anywhere as good as what you have graced us all in this tender, heart-warming miracle of literature.
Bless you for your creativity and insight!
I guess I couldn't give any more suitable response than this: [link]
Wonderful, wonderful story. This has settled to be one of my utmost favorite MLP fanfics. Blueblood's characterization worked brilliantly, at first I was skeptical on Blueblood-Rarity ship, but you could say that Bluey really won me over. Not to mention how story rolled smoothly from start to finish and had SO MUCH HEARTWARMING. SweetieSpike was a nice touch, FlutterMac is always generous plus in my eyes and even Diamond Tiara & Silver Spoon are getting their share of character development.
All my salutes, Autumn. All my salutes
I don't have any sequels planned for the moment, mostly because I'm somewhat burned out on this fic for now. Perhaps one day, but I cannot make any promises. I'm glad you enjoyed it, however. It's likely that I'll eventually make other works in a similar mood, however.
Feel free to look up my other writings. Glad you enjoyed this one! ^^
That is all I have to say.