This is very well written, although I am not a huge fan of the whole idea of Derpy being a mother, but that's just me. This piece may have just pushed me to thinking that she is a mother just a little farther. Thank you for such an amazing fic.
I didn't mean it as any kind of degrading comment regarding "My Sweetie" (which IS great story by its own right and I'm eagerly waiting for its sequel to continue ). Personally I haven't own MLP headcanon, so the different interpretations in fanfiction don't bother me that much (even if they include ships I'm not too fond of).
Oh dear, I didnt mean for it to be taken that way, sorry :S I just meant I wont be reading this for fear of making changes to my own that will result in a mismash crossover, something I tried and my have failed already with bubbles...
YES YES YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is the best MLP fanfiction I have ever read. In. My. Life. I laughed, I cried, (no, really) and the characters just jumped off the page - so alive and believable. See this journal: [link]