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Shimmer by Autumn-Wind-MLP Shimmer by Autumn-Wind-MLP

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Sparkler has a happy life with her adoptive mother and sister. However, a secret weighs heavy on her. Seeking some advice and relief, she comes knocking at Cheerilee's door.

What does the filly want to confess?

Thanks to Taggerung for the pic!

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x69xSILVERx69x Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013
By any chance do you have this story on Fimfiction.net?
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Autumn-Wind-MLP Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013
I do. I have all of my stories there.
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fotland42 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
It bothers me that Cheerilee said "muffin promise" at the end. Muffin promises are special. Not just anypony can make a muffin promise, and it was not Cheerilee's place to be so presumptuous.
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Autumn-Wind-MLP Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
Sparkler was pretty happy about it. I don't believe Cheerilee overstepped her limits there.

Interesting thought though.
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TheRebelPhoenix Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012
But... her names Derpy.
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Autumn-Wind-MLP Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012
I'd like to point out that this fic was published several months ago, before the name Derpy was canonized, and back when Derpy and Ditzy were considered equally valid.

Also, keep in mind that some people still prefer using Ditzy because they find Derpy to be too pejorative to the character.

Thanks for your comment. ^^
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Edgeworth1001 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012
This is the best fanfiction I ever read!
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DarkApostleMatt Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012
Beautiful story.
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kevinguzzer Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2012
my reactions from start to finish:
:iconpinkiepieexcitedplz: , :iconapplejackfillysad:, :iconapplejackishappyplz: (reads about Ditzy), :iconpinkiepiesad: (about sparkles's and Shimmer's parents), :iconapplejackishappyplz: (again Ditzy :D) :iconpinkiepiewaitwutplz: :iconapplejacknoesplz: :icontwilightnoesplz: :iconpinkiepienoesplz: (about Shim- i mean Dinky), :iconmanlytearsplz: :icontwilightclapplz: :iconderpyclapplz: its... beautiful... :iconitsbeautifulplz:
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Xeno-the-Hedgehog Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is a truly powerful story. Ditzy and her alleged family are among my favorite characters, and it's always nice to see someone portray them so well.
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